Feed back from class mates

In our last media lesson, we were asked to give feed back on our class mates works. We were given 10 questions to answer on each of the media products. These questions were:

1) what do we think the audience is; age,gender, students?


2)What genre of music; rock,indie,pop and dance.

3)What was the house style; did it blend with the contents page and middle page to the front cover.

4)Looking carefully at the contents page to the whole magazine; does it have what you expect the magazine to have.

5)Are the articles in the magazine what you expect in the magazine.

6)Are the images suitable for the magazine; do the images relate to your magazine.

7)What overall is in the impact of the middle page.

8)Is my music magaine in line with the gener of music.

9) Any errors in the magazine

10) Any improvments.
 
My class mates also answered these questions on my music magazine. From the range of feedback I got, I could see that people knew what my targeted audience were. From looking at my front cover, people knew that it was an R 'n' B / Hip hop magazine. They also agreed that my content page and middle spread both blended in with the house style. Others thought that the image of the city at the bottom of the pages helped keep the house style as well as attract my target audience. The feed back also showed that most people agreed with my images relating to the magazine. they also agreed that my middle page was simple but effective however, i was also told that i had too much text and this would need improving as most young reders would prefer more images than text.